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The Zephyr Key's Host

by ~BlindedByMemories

Kaylin struggled with all her might to keep the light train under her power as she willed it to continue on with the correct gates. The use of her power was draining most of her energy and now she stood at the front of the train, beads of sweat rolling down her neck and back. She gasped out once, forgetting to breathe because she was concentrating so much. She balled her fists tightly and then she saw a light ahead, relieved to find the next gate.
Kaylin collapsed, exhausted, and knelt down as the light train turned brighter and brighter . . .
She found herself in a dark forest. Coldness wrapped around her swiftly, making her shiver. The ground was cold and hard beneath her shoes and when she walked the frosted grass crunched. But her footsteps were not alone. Soon she heard others and when she turned around she saw Darus.
"Kaylin," he said with a wicked grin.
Kaylin thrust her hand out and her Zephyr snapped the tree in half and it craned towards Darus. But he swiftly jumped out of the way and grinned like a sly cat as the tree crashed into the ground loudly.
"Such a pity that your power will go to waste," he murmured, walking closer to her. With every step he took closer, she took one step backwards.
"What do you mean?" Kaylin asked. Her zephyr broiled in her mind, at the ready.
"You are the Zephyr Key, Kaylin," Darus spoke softly. "It's your duty to destroy the last gate, not open it. If you open it you will continue this process over and over again . . . No one has ever had the courage to destroy the last gate because if they do they will disappear with it."
"Why are you telling me this?" Kaylin asked, her heart pounding against her rib cage frantically.
"You have a right to know," Darus said.
And before Darus could say anything else Kaylin summoned the light train, jumped on and disappeared in the next instant, trying to remember how to breathe.
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Chapter Seven of the Odyssey Into 2012.
Name of Chapter: The Zephyr Key's Host
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Mood: Wow! ~KaiDarknight Jan 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
oh man this is awesome! congrats being chosen :D

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:iconblindedbymemories:
thnx so much~!

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~KaiDarknight Jan 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
you're welcome :)

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Never leave home without it. First thing Batman taught me.
-Robin/Dick Grayson from Young Justice ep 3 "Welcome to Happy Harbor"</i>
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:iconblindedbymemories:
;D

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:iconrooster5man:
I like the chapter! And Congrats!

I'm not fond about the "You are the Zephyr Key" idea, but you wrapped it up nicely by suggesting that opening the last gate creates an endless cycle, like a paradox. At least, that was my take on it.
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:iconblindedbymemories:
aw thnx!
and i was hoping tht ppl would enjoy the endless cycle
-^_^-

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:iconrooster5man:
You're welcome!

Haha, we do =P
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:iconblindedbymemories:
^_^

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~Sayuri14 Dec 29, 2011  Student Writer
Congrats on being selected :)

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:iconblindedbymemories:
thnx soooo much!

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